Tsunami (a Villanelle)
O.K., I tried a triolet, now a first time try on a villanelle. I patterned the rhlythm after "House on the Hill" Mostly iambic trimeter. I don't know if there is a restriction on this. SMF CC...
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Shelby,This is a wonderful villanelle. I can't find any restrictions either. It works for me.Annette
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Thanks Annette. I was hoping for some comments on this, and I particularly appreciate your comments, since I am rather inexperienced in these forms, I filgulred i was never too old to try some of...
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Hi Shelby, Don't know the form myself, but this is a most effective write. Off to check out a bit.Regards,Maryse
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Shelby, Kudos my friend on this Villanelle. It is good to see you are trying new things. I would like to try this myself. Hmmm, maybe I had better get caught up on my reading since I have been gone...
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Wonderful, Shelby I'm not sure, I think I did one villanelle at Halloween last year..lol; but it's the only one I've ever done, so I don't know enough about it to make any constructive comments....
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Thank you Marysse, Wanda and Jody for your comments. I appreciate them.Just thouoght I wuld try somethingdifferent. challenge is good for tlhe soul.Ha.shelbyMetric feet with rhythmic beatwill keep in...
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Shelby,I've posted an early attempt at a Villanelle....back in the day when I didn't pay too much attention to meter. Perhaps, it is worth the time for a rewrite. Annette
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Annette, when I come ba, I am looking forward to checking your post (going out the door now)I can't do anything but learnfrom yours.ShelbyMetric feet with rhythmic beatwill keep in step with time,to...
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